matdig's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Misty Mountains Cold CC]

Your animation is really charming. The remix was a unique twist to the original. The only things I would change are the level of autotuning. It gets hard to understand at certain points in the song, but then again I know nothing about how that works so forgive any ignorance on my part. Your replay button doesn't work, either. Did you need help with the coding for that? If so, send me a PM and I'll see what I can do to help you out.

[Girl Problems]

While I applaud you doing your own voice acting music, I think this short warrants a mature rating based on the dialogue and the language. You also need to show the audience that you're portraying yourself as a girl in order to prevent confusion over why the main character has a male voice.

You should also keep in mind that mature humor, like any humor, is an art and a lot of "it" is in the delivery. I can see potential in your animation, but I really feel like you need to spend a lot more time in planning and execution.

Efilpooc responds:

Yeah I normally plan my toons out with more sensible set-up humor. I just recently started animating with flash again for the first time in two years. I'm just trying to foreshadow my up-coming animations. I have a series with a large cast that I'm trying to get going. Thank you I appreciate you're feedback, deep dude, very deep.

[Little Bunny Foo Foo: No Evil 008]

The singing bit when the water spirit funneled the bandits into that well was my favorite part. That bit of melody was gorgeous. Well done!

[Saten & Jezus]

I savored the giant dose of "wat" that this short gave me XD